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rhodes

it's been a while how've you been :)

liking this groove thing at 0:10

trunotfals responds:

YOU GET A CANDY BAR. Go but one :P Ive been good! It really has been a long time

"I cannot jump high like you, but I am enthusiastic.
Enthusiasm makes everything an adventure."

- A Moki from Ori, who was probably doing drugs or something

johnfn responds:

but he wasn't high so HMMMMMMM the mystery deepens!!!1

You picked the right genre

Miyolophone responds:

i was seriously this close to picking "Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Nerdcore" instead

You should pull a Gareth Coker and just write 50 songs with this melody in it

Miyolophone responds:

i should BUT since i had to write this very fast i kind of just copied (and arguably improved) a melody i had already written for a different secret song so stay tuned!

Honestly even if you don't get a chance in this round, I'm so glad you graced us all with this

This is so exceptional and every single piece of it is a journey and it arcs so well and I love it

And yes you should definitely do *the thing* at 02:17 ;)

stardew responds:

tysm! i will be sure to do The Thing

Good luck in the next round ;) judging by the quality of this this is gonna be tough haha

heck 1:55 is so effective

this is incredible, by the way.

heck, 0:55 and 1:06 are so good

and the guitar shreddage in the last climax!

this deserves more ears

3YEOfficial responds:

Thanks so much man!!!

Hey, nice track :)

You've done a really good job getting everything to sound really full. The drums and the bass sit right where they need to. The sidechain is just right, especially in the intro where you've sidechained stuff a lot more than in other parts

I really like this section from 1:17 to 1:42 - the lead is really well done and has the vibrato I like.

I thought the first drop felt bigger than the second drop, which for a better sense of progression should be reversed. In general the drops felt a bit repetitive for my taste and I wish they were more varied.

The piece could also use some more dynamic variation, as it's very loud all the way through. The section starting at 1:43 and 2:46 appear to be a good candidate for a softer section. The volume is especially odd at 1:43 because without the other context, it makes the lead sound grating.

Also the lead melody doesn't really work harmonically with the buildup at 1:48.

Overall though really solid work. Hopefully that helped give you some direction about where the piece could have gone - but it's definitely got a lot going for it already!

Spline-1337 responds:

Thank you, Infinity!

wElcOmE tO tHe mArkEtIng viDeO

SplatterDash responds:

👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

Hey long time no see! Where you've been man <3

We should like connect again, do you have discord?

aliaspharow responds:

Haven't made music in a year and half, it's nice to see that I can still pick it up even after that long though lol. I don't have discord but You can email me at simoncameron@hotmail.ca <<< notice the "ca". and we can get something going. I remember you and I'll try hitting up some of your tracks. Sorry I havent been on here in ages.

Updated the track if you want to check it out again ^^

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